Sunday, March 1, 2009

The Blood Red Horse-Chapter 5

William got a new warhorse called Hosanna, and its size isn't big, so his brother, Gavin joked and teased about it. William and Gavin were always in fight no matter what and where. William loves owning warhorses, but Gavin always tease about William owning little ponies. William hate the comparison between him and his brother, but Gavin always calls William his "little brother". Gavin wants to embarrass Will in front of everyone, so he invited Will to the joust field. He thought that Hosanna doesn't run fast, but he was wrong. They were gonna have joust fights, but Sir Thomas doesn't want either of them to get hurt. So they were racing for speed, look which horse runs the fastest. The race starts, first Hosanna stay still and silent while Montlouis(Gavin's warhorse) is sprinting to the end point. William starts begging Hosanna to run, but it doesn't really worked, suddenly he said "Oh, I should have worn spurs." After Will said that, Hosanna starts to gallop faster than a blink of an eye. Everyone was impressed, and Sir Thomas was surprised too. Gavin saw it, he started to compliment something about Will, and trying to be nice. He also tell Will to make a promise that he'll take care of Ellie if Gave is not coming back from the war, and to have the abbot or like the priest to say Mass every day for his soul if he died. They were all kind of friendly and nice to each other, it's like a peace between them.

5 comments:

kitty said...

good start~

Duke said...

I like, how you described every single sentences by using a different terms, and words :D

Anonymous said...

heh......=口=
well-done eh~~><
I like how u put so much information and in such a detailed way =]
keep going =]
great job =]
loving it =]
xD

Jen said...

Great post... :]

When Gavin was trying to get people to say Mass for him everyday was a little selfish. It was like if someone in the family went away and they wanted you to clean their room each day.... If I were Will, I would pray for my brother though not devote my whole life to him.

Lydia said...

I like how you describe Gavin and Will, and how you tell us what happening between chapter 1 to chapter 5 :D